Two pies of household water

Write, then mark it yourself.

The charts below show the share of household water used for gardens, kitchens, and other indoor uses in a town in 2005 and 2020.

2005: gardens 48%, kitchens 27%, other indoor 25%. 2020: gardens 19%, kitchens 46%, other indoor 35%.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Templates for Task 1, introduction, overview, body

Insert a template, then replace every [bracket] with your own words. The examiner does not penalise structure, only memorised phrases that don't fit.

  • Introduction (paraphrase)The [bar chart / line graph / table] compares [what is measured] in [places/groups] between [year] and [year].One sentence. Change the prompt's words: shows → compares, the number of → how many.
  • Overview (the big picture)Overall, [the main trend: most figures rose / X was the highest throughout], while [the biggest contrast or exception].No numbers here. Two main features. Without an overview, Task Achievement stays at 5 or below.
  • Body paragraph 1In [first year], [X] had the highest figure, at [number], whereas [Y] was much lower, at [number]. By [later year], [X] had [risen/fallen] to [number].Group the data. Compare with whereas / while. Use past tense for past years.
  • Body paragraph 2[Y], by contrast, [increased/decreased] [sharply/slightly] from [number] to [number]. [Z] remained the lowest throughout, at around [number].Cover the remaining groups. Use rose to / fell by correctly.

0 / 150 words

  • Your summary says “garden use” went down the most and “kitchen use” became the biggest part.
  • Write the numbers as parts of a whole, not as a count of people.
  • Do not make up your own reasons for why things changed.
  • Write at least 150 words. Use past tense and use paragraphs.

All four criteria are needed. Under 150 words should hold Task Achievement or Task Response down.