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Writing 05

Task: The maps show a small park in 2010 and 2020. In 2010 there was a pond and no path. In 2020 the pond remained, a path was added, and a play area replaced a patch of grass. Describe the changes. Write at least 150 words.

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The maps show a small park in 2010 and in 2020. In 2010 the park had a pond and it had grass and it did not have a path. In 2020 the pond was still there. A path was added across the grass. A play area replaced some grass. The biggest change was the path and the play area. The pond stayed the same and this same pond was the same as before. Children should play outside because indoor games is not healthy and parents must bring them to parks. And also I went to a park last Friday. So so the park became more busy. Overall the park kept the pond but gained a path and a play area.

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