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Writing 09

Task: Some people think every student should take a part-time job. Others think a job hurts study. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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Part-time jobs is a common topic for students in many cities. Some people think a job teaches time skills and money skills. A student who works on weekends can learn how to talk to customers. Other people think a job makes study weak because the student comes home tired. I agree with the second group more than the first group. When I was in college I work in a small shop and my marks goes down in that term. The shop was noisy and the shop was noisy at night. And also friends can be a problem if they call you to play. So so jobs are bad. Cricket is also very popular in my country and young boys play it after class. A balance is possible if the hours are short.

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