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Task: Living away from your family has advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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Living away from family have good points and hard points. One advantage is independence. A person learn to cook, pay rent, and plan a week. Another advantage is focus, because the home may be noisy. The disadvantages is loneliness and cost. Meals, travel, and a room can eat the money a student has. I think the experience is useful after the age of eighteen if the person calls home often. And also freedom is sweet and sweet. So so families worry a lot. New mobile phones come out every year and shops put posters on the wall. A young person can grow, but they should not cut the family tie. I support a careful move, not a sudden one.

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